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I hate idiots

Discussion in 'Are you pissed off?' started by DamienRaquel, Jun 20, 2008.

  1. DamienRaquel

    DamienRaquel New Member

    So I joined a poetry forum that looked pretty cool, and then some jackass moderator kicked me off. Why? Because I swore? No. Because I didn't "have the equipment to function" and I was an "illiterate teenager". Now, neither of the above are true. He's just an ass. Oh, and here's my poem, tell me please if it or I suck:


    Stretched silk before your eyes,
    blinding you to the sight of candlewax,
    as dusk infiltrates these quarters.
    The humid night oppresses skin;
    rivulets of cool water fail to cleanse.
    The pattern of burgundy on the rug,
    the texture of the sheet -
    this things will fall forgotten.
    Tender marks of rope align your wrists
    to the curtains
    and the softest caresses cause a flinch -
    the softest of experiences
    cause you to writhe
    pale form slaughtering my responses
    with your hard edge of ecstasy -
    all developed on this bed.
  2. Jehovah

    Jehovah New Member

    its not u that poem kicks major ass

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